Today I’m going to write about one of the traps that nonfiction writers sometimes fall into. We spend a lot of time and energy doing our research and as we research we uncover so many amazing things.
Did you know…?
Can you believe…?
I had no idea…!
And we want to share them all. Because of this, our work sometimes spirals out of control. That 500 word articles tops 1000 words. The picture book stretches towards 2000. A longer than expected word count definitely won’t work for a magazine piece if it is over the word count that the magazine publishes or the editor aske you to write.
A longer than expected picture book can work if it feels tight and co-hesive. But that’s the problem. So often something that is over-long feels long. Fortunately, there is a solution.
Focus on your story. Yes, story.
Even if you are writing nonfiction you are telling a story. It is your slant or focus.
This means that I wouldn’t write a picture book about all things Lakota. Maybe I would write about Crazy Horse. Or I might write about winter counts. Or star quilts — I love Lakota Star quilts. But all of this in one picture book would be messy and all over the place.
This doesn’t mean that you have to know exactly what your slant will be when you begin to do your research. Just gather the information. As you research, something will catch your eye. Or you will find that you have some really interesting material about this right here.
Once you have chosen a story, then you know what facts to include. And just because we call it a story doesn’t mean that anything is made up. This isn’t fiction, but nonfiction. “Story” is just a way to focus your thoughts and shape the written piece as you look for what led to your story, the attempts to solve or develop whatever, and then how it all played out in the end.
Again, your nonfiction has to be 100% factual. But thinking of it as a story is a great way to pick and choose the information you will present your reader.