Hopefully when you read this I’ll have a full draft done on my next book. Hopefully. I’m only about 1/3 of the way through my last chapter and my willpower is more like won’t-power at the moment.
In this first draft, I do try to get everything in the right order but I don’t worry about things being smooth and perfect. Or not.
I also don’t worry too much about whether or not I have enough information. That’s something I’m going to address in the next draft.
When I prepared chapter 1 and my outline last week, my chapter was way too long. This wasn’t a problem that I could correct by cutting a word here and a word there. I had to eliminate entire paragraphs. This meant less background information and fewer examples.
As I draft chapters 2 through 5, I’ve noticed that my word count is very close to perfect. The reason that this worries me is that I should have to edit a paper draft to tighten things up. This should be when I get rid of those extra words especially -ly adverbs or replacing a weak verb with two adverbs with a single strong verb.
I suspect that, as I worry about surpassing my word count yet again, I’m being too cautious.
I always have to add more information when I write the second draft. That’s when I fill in the blanks — things that weren’t in my notes or that obviously need clarification with another example. Instead of spending the time to do a great deal of research, I simply type a question or comment in CAPS and then highlight it. When completing draft 2, I go back and do the research needed to fill these blanks in. This time around I’ll be rereading each chapter and looking for places that the information isn’t dense enough. I’ll add to any area that seems a bit weak. Then I’ll cut to make it all fit.
I want to give my readers as much information as possible without overwhelming them. As are so many things with writing, its a balancing act. Here’s to leveling things out in the next draft!